Patch Request: Atmospheric-y Melodic Sound

There's this atmospheric melodic sound that glides up and hits right when the kick starts up again and is used as atmospheric interest throughout the track. You can hear it start around 0:59 in this link:

here's a quick patch I made that sounds similar but way worse:

How would you go about designing this sort of sound? I feel like in the original the pitch gliding sounds very focused and leaves a nice tail, it's less washed out and doesn't fill up the mix unnecessarily like when I try to make it.

Any thoughts or guidance is much appreciated. Thank you!!